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Tomer
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0 posted 2009-11-08 06:51 PM


The sun shun through the night
and the whiskey of the party
lasted until the early hours of the morning.

Friday turned to Saturday,
and the streets emptied
to the music beset by conversation.

Long laughs and blurred sight,
round and long faces
from the kitchen to the bathroom door.

The elevator going back and forth
like the past to present.
The present moment,
where I sat on the couch,
remembering a sip of whiskey
didn't always broaden my lips into a smile.

As a child, I was happy to be alive,
To be young,
and a revelation deserted the party
into my head, to rediscover that magic, again.

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