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If a Heart Cries
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If a Heart Cries |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
10-19-09 if a heart cries in the dark, does anyone hear it? the night brings me down, adds to my sorrow. i have no Strength, no thoughts for tomorrow. i'm lost, and alone,blind in the darknesS 0f my th0ughts and no one cares. I am n0 0ne i am nothing. i cause Heartache & great pain. my tears fl0w d0wn like rivers thru my Degradati0n & my shame. i havE n0thing i have n0 0ne t0 h0ld me cl0se when i am scared. they always leave me & decieve me when i th0ught they truly cared. "Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!" |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
A sad tale to be sure. A well written tale of woe. once in my long ago youth I was between jobs, and homeless. Just for a short time. I felt like this then. I don't advise people on the writing of their poems. I remember the old saw. "tell a tale but seldom twice. Give a stone before advise." This is just the thing to read as I sit here at the computer drinking coffee listening to Mozart. You have made my day more enjoyable! God Bless Bob |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
This is such a fine poem, I feel compelled to return it to the top of the list. |
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