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young_blood
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0 posted 2009-10-24 09:51 AM


I once let the dog
out
of the house
only to find it on the doorstep.
I once let the cat
out
of the bag
and it never returned.

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Chaotic_Soul
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Leon, GTO, Mexico
1 posted 2009-10-24 11:21 AM


It's short, but no need for it to be any longer. I really like this one. Great work that you have.  

"A poet looks at the world the way a man looks at a woman." -Wallace Stevens

"A poet's autobiography is his poetry. Anything else is just a footnot

young_blood
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2 posted 2009-10-24 11:34 AM


Thanks! I don't really think my brain thinks longer thoughts than these.
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3 posted 2009-10-24 01:39 PM


I got that one and loved it!  However, now I can't get that stupid song out of my head, "Who Let The Dog Out?"
young_blood
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4 posted 2009-10-24 06:40 PM


OH NO! j/k Thanks for reading as always
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5 posted 2009-10-24 07:20 PM


I like it. I've let many cats out of many bags they just never seem to go back in.

Arana Darkwolf

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