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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2009-10-24 12:07 PM



Shivered Proclivity

Breath, slow and shallow
Misted thought, slickened sound
Reward like apple wine
Color has washed its whisper from the trees
Floating unencumbered to the ground
Dilated blue-green, the sight as yet unseen
Have then I become forgotten
Nor shall I be recalled to silent nights
Feel me, as the wind that strokes
Iridescent touch befall, jeweled regard come call
These times connect us in the rhymes
And I resume content in your keeping
Love, so surely not gone sleeping
Crackle in the air of autumn crisp
You are my one true heart, as I am song
Sacred and ever air bonds us to the fall
And here; breath, slow and shallow
Do I decorate your flanks, willow and silk
And do, we dance beside rippling clarity
Time and certain tide

Copyright Kkh 10/24/09

© Copyright 2009 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
1 posted 2009-10-24 12:22 PM


Diamond, GREAT to see you back!

you take my breath away
with this one

You are my one true heart, as I am song
Sacred and ever air bonds us to the fall
And here; breath, slow and shallow
Do I decorate your flanks, willow and silk
And do, we dance beside rippling clarity
Time and certain tide

this just HOOKS me!
and the last two lines...
mmmm
perfect

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2 posted 2009-10-24 01:30 PM


quote:
You are my one true heart, as I am song
Sacred and ever air bonds us to the fall
And here; breath, slow and shallow
Do I decorate your flanks, willow and silk
And do, we dance beside rippling clarity
Time and certain tide
  Oh my but I loved this.  You have truly been missed, as this is my all-time favorite of yours.

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Gaia
3 posted 2009-10-26 10:40 PM


Beautiful write!
viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
4 posted 2009-10-26 10:56 PM


color has washed it's whisper from the trees.

Me likey. Great Job TD.
Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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