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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2009-10-22 02:05 PM





His hot honey
Words murmured
Overflowing her ears
Dripping sweetly
From nibbled lobes
Down her neck and shoulders
Seeking to warm the valleys
Of her heart and soul
Sweet wet tresses
Thrown back and twisted
Into a sticky bun
Exposing her nape
To lips and teeth
That masticates
Her to madness


(devil’s tower) series


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young_blood
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1 posted 2009-10-22 02:49 PM


Dirty. Excellent rhythm.
Bill Charles
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2 posted 2009-10-22 02:57 PM


Lori Grosser Rhoden - yikes, where this woman be I must ponder...

BC

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2009-10-22 03:01 PM


young_blood,  Is "dirty" your generation's word for erotic ? Either way, I'll take it as a compliment~L

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-10-22 03:05 PM


Ms LG. I can see the toil of the butterfly as she emerges from her edges. A pleasure to feel the wings in this.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2009-10-22 03:06 PM


B C- I believe she burns somewhere inside every goddess heart~L
young_blood
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6 posted 2009-10-22 03:07 PM


Yes it is. I'll try to use some "older" words for you!
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2009-10-22 03:09 PM


D- I assure you, the pleasure was all mine~L
Bridget Shenachie
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8 posted 2009-10-28 11:45 PM


"More, please."

Shenachie

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