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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2009-10-22 01:08 PM


From Here To There

© Copyright 2009 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
AncientHippie
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Surfing the Cosmic Flow
1 posted 2009-10-22 01:54 PM


Pleasant and sincere read, Bill.  I love the sense of longing, of seeking, that comes across.Thank you.

Sutra 8: Faith is not an alternative to thought: the one excludes the other.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2009-10-22 02:17 PM


Bill, very, very romantic! delightful!~L
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2009-10-22 06:00 PM


It's always very touching to read you~~


M

Ariana
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4 posted 2009-10-23 12:00 PM


Bill

Now this is what I was talking about.

"yet you live in the deepest of my thoughts, from here to there".  

Just these few words speak volumes of feelings and emotions.  I absolutely love it.  Nice work.  

Ariana

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2009-10-23 12:07 PM


It is a blessing to read you again Bill, and how lovely this is.  ~D
EagleOne
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6 posted 2009-10-23 12:17 PM


“I write words not lightly”, for me this line just stands out. Enjoyed!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2009-10-23 03:46 PM


Gawww!  Your poetry is after my own heart.
Every word touches ever so delicately,  with such care and deep emotion.  

It's easy to feel your words and hold them close.

Just Beautiful, BC~

Margherita
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8 posted 2009-10-23 05:48 PM


quote:
Safe I feel secreted deeply within you, for tender is my being's sensitive heart ....


I memorized this as your presentation does not allow copying, hope I got it right. I love your deep sensitivity, dear Poet Bill.

The sweet longing is beautifully expressed.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2009-10-24 12:02 PM


..."I reside, in the mists of twighlight's dawn, and speak in whispers"

Indeed, you do, dear Troubador.


Linda

martiniat8
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10 posted 2009-10-24 12:36 PM


Bill, you are truly truly, an artist!
Bravisimo!

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
11 posted 2009-10-24 01:51 PM


AncientHippie - appreciate you coming by, and for your gracious reply...

Lori Grosser Rhoden - glad you enjoyed this writing...

Maureen - and it's touching to read yours...

Ariana - your words speak volumes, thank you...

Gentle Spirit - I'm blessed by your reply...

EagleOne - thank you for your reply...

Blues One - I'm touched that they can touch you in this way...

Margherita - I always sense your words from your heart, means a lot to me...

Earth Angel - always look forward to your comments, as they are most becoming...

martiniat8 - your words are very touching, and go to my heart...

BC

suthern
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12 posted 2009-10-26 11:22 AM


"To know you is to read your words of prose."

Some of those who mean the most to me have come to live in my heart just so. *S* This is very beautiful, Bill... Tender perfection! *S*

2islander2
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13 posted 2009-10-26 12:51 PM


always enjoyable, great work and sexy picture.

regards

yann

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
14 posted 2009-10-26 01:46 PM


suthern - so gracious you are, and with a warm heart. An unbeatable combination...

yann - appreciate your kind words. At times it takes me hours to find the right picture to go with the poem...

BC

nourzihane
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15 posted 2009-10-26 02:04 PM


First, thank you for this  romantic roses
i like roses so much especially the red
Are there more?
You are a poet at the top Thank you for this beauty royal.

friend
Nourzihane


Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
16 posted 2009-10-26 05:02 PM


nourzihane - I thank you for stopping by and commenting about this writing. I also love red roses for they signify the deepest of emotions towards someone special. Yes, there are more...

BC

Sunshine
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17 posted 2009-10-26 06:50 PM


William,

I'm sighing with some sound longing, smiling with you at this lovely poem. Moreover, the techniques to apply it to the forum are beyond my ken. Do you hear the applause?

I hope so.

It's beautiful!


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18 posted 2009-10-27 01:20 AM


Bill,

Beautiful and wrapped up so well.  Your combination of poetry and photography is stunning - and Liz is right.  You are a romantic.

Thank you for sharing.
Alison

micecollector
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19 posted 2009-10-28 03:00 PM


Yes, indeed, you are a romantic and that is a good thing.  Keep on writing these indepth feelings.  

In God we trust and one nation under God

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