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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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New Orleans

0 posted 2009-10-17 08:06 PM



I was looking, looking so far ahead
I guess it was my fault I lied
But, it was your fault you cried
And our fault, our love died

So tell me why you cried,
No don't,
Wouldn't care even if you did,
Remember that time?

Way back when, when I did?
I hope,
I hope,
You never feel my pain.

You'll, you'll have such a fun time,
I promise,
That's not just a line,

Does that make me soft?
Does that mean,
I have no self-respect?

Then let it be.


Let it be.

So.


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GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

1 posted 2009-10-18 04:55 PM


Very Sad.
Sounds like a relationship dying out.

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