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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2009-10-17 06:16 PM



He has had dreams
of those

or
the

one

he loved


at the moment

for the moment

or before

the moment


always waking
the questions

unresolved

but this one

is different

she...


He couldn't remember
how he phrased the question

but her answer
read...

"Truly"

"the author, the artist, is never more than 50% of the piece. The audience, AH, now there is the key. Never more, nor less, than 50% of me."

© Copyright 2009 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2009-10-17 09:46 PM


love the way you break and space and sting the end!~L
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