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He and She |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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He sleeps on the couch softly snoring She moves his legs so she can sit He opens a bloodshot eye and groans She gives his rump a reminding pat He huffs and adjusts his compromised position She unfolds a quilt and tucks it around them He sighs and gently wags his tail [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (10-18-2009 02:54 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, that ending got me! |
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AncientHippie Member
since 2009-10-15
Posts 411Surfing the Cosmic Flow |
I love this poem, Lori. What a pleasant surprise! Thank you so much. Jim Sutra 3: See your reality for what it is, not for what you think it is: this is the first step to making your reality what you wish it to be. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
cute! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Jim, I accept your comments with highest regards. ~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Midnitesun and martiniat8, glad you like my humorous look at my life |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
they cut mine off (tail) when I was just a pup...left my ears alone though...always thought of myself as quite lithe, as far as a great dane and doxie can be that is.. enjoyed your capture |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
D thanks for your eyes and encouraging words~L |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This also describes me. lol I like the 'twist' at the end. Well done. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
What a pleasant read! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
C G, Here's a belly rub for ya.LOL thanks~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
young_blood Thanks for checking me out, glad you like!~L |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That is exactly why I got a smaller dog this time  That was so cute, and probably every pet owner has had this experience. Even my wee one tries.  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Mysteria-Gotta love 'em, I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for letting me know.~L |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love this and am not letting my Stuart dog read it. He might use it against me. Alison |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Now if it were a cat, he just wouldn't move.. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Alison-LOL! Glad you liked it, give Stuart a belly rub for me!~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Nan- dogs can be commanded but cats have to be seduced into thinking your will is their idea! LOL thanks for your comment~L |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Loving this! |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Smiling here... |
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