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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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There is a line that eludes me An evil I overlook That lurks along my path looking at me As I reach out Passing on What I can As I am called As I feel needed Too concerned With the task at hand’s Higher purpose Warnings go unheeded About misunderstandings And motives Of ill intent That snares innocence Into innuendo Guts it Skins it Hangs it Out to dry Tainted And Jaded [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (10-16-2009 10:22 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ouch a reminder to always be aware of your surroundings |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
The hard part is to do what you know is right irregardless of what it looks like. Thanks for checking me out~L |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lg...I bet it is dangerous out there...better not go out...unless you enjoy the nibbles of shivers |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
ds- it is the nibble of sharks I could do without~L |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...the world is full of sharks my friend, all too willing to take everything you have...trust will leave treadmarks all over you if you don't 'trust' with reservations... enjoyed the write... j. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
jwesley Thanks for checking me out, glad you like. Have tattooed over the worst of the tread marks and married my Utopia where I can trust without reservation. My fatal flaw is to look for the good in people first.~L |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Another well written piece. Arana Darkwolf |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Arana Darkwolf- You honor me with your words "another" and "well written" Bless you!~L |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
I've had these thoughts and enjoyed the way that you penned them. Upon reading this--Note to self--Ignore the bad and those who feed of it. Shenachie |
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