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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2009-10-16 05:30 PM



In a recurring dream of childhood
that unfolds like a blossoming flower
I return again and again
to that grey, foreboding tower.
Standing like an aging sentinel
amid the ruins of an old estate
where hunted and alone,
a wounded soldier waits...
and I know I must not fail him
as I slip past the iron gate.

What a stark and desolate scene
where brooding winter lingers;
bare trees seem to reach for the tower
with their crooked, bony fingers.
These ruins that once were my castle
covered with fairy dust,
now my secret destination
known only to one I trust.

As I approach the tower I am fearful
for I sense a danger here
but while war has raged around me
I have become accustomed to fear.

I climb the broken staircase,
I enter the tower room
and I know from his grave condition,
this will be a soldier's tomb.

Our eyes meet in desperation
across this room where once I played
for I hear the sound of approaching troops
and I know...
I have been betrayed!

                             Ida Werrett

© Copyright 2009 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2009-10-16 07:10 PM


Ida
Enjoyed that very much, made me feel like I got in on the last segment of a  great mini series. L

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2009-10-16 09:52 PM


You made me grab my blankie this time, Ida.
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