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precise
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since 2009-10-15
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0 posted 2009-10-16 01:36 PM


Graze These Stars

A bead drops.
Waves splash, penetrating water
   revert, inverting walls, liquid
   outward against the pulling within.
Riptide pressures tinkering marbles
   ever passing sight of consciousness.
Hype shuttle missions: best vacation offered of man.
Break atmosphere, not a spec of trouble
   “how small are we?”
Insanity at discover of available variety.
Humanity stretch in an ever essence,
   the faster conversation turns off guardian.
Ideas share from vaults confirmation,
   defense sensitivity negotiating factors
   by importance and relativity.
Sale a story like the cover of national magazines
   convincing ideology, reason be define,
   resource and effectively implicating knowledge.
Throw the boomerang out there and let em’ flutter
   generate momentum, dominate the over coming.
Rip tide coast, moderate behavior
   yielding moderate results.
Majority, harboring like you’re ill taken
   when liberal decisions
   not well thought out, consequent.
Represent everyday: race, gender, geography,
   class, status, general species.
Erase your database and give everything a shot.
“I’m sorry but I cannot let opportunity
   just walk on by when I’m looking
   to activate the largest muscle in this cranium.”
Living to the fullest is the solo goal in life,
   broad may be called to description, I dear write.
How to live the instant imprinting positive time?
Only you afford choice, only you deny sacrifice.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
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1 posted 2009-10-16 08:59 PM


Glad I found you again. The symbols are throwing me but looks like they belong there and I feel stupid because I could be liking a typo. I like where you are coming from and your techno edge.
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