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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2009-10-16 11:32 AM


I pre-spoke
this heart belongs to no one

but to my self
and to my Lord

projecting it
on a fancy line

the bait
I wait

the closer I get
seems
the more shut out

I am

the paradox of this reality

to one that is so sweet
so gentle

to me

a vestal virgin
experience

Faraway, so close

© Copyright 2009 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2009-10-16 12:02 PM


enjoyed it.

yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2009-10-17 10:24 PM


as poets we are both naked and invisible
at the same time~L

martiniat8
Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
3 posted 2009-10-19 02:27 AM


Merci beaucoup, Yann

great comment Lori, so true, thank you

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