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Open Poetry #45
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Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
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0 posted 2009-10-16 08:27 AM

Our eyes met.
Our souls touched.
First love is a feeling that you never forget.

First love brought to my heart.
A flood of emotions.
Beautiful and wide.
Exciting like a balloon ride.

Years go by and days pass.
But the memory of a first love will always last.
This is something that must be realized from the start.
A first love always remains in a secret place in the heart.
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2009-10-16 12:47 PM

Absolute truth.
Lovely presentation, could relate to the gentle tide of this.
2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2009-10-16 12:47 PM

yes that's true, enjoyed your poem

yann
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