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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
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0 posted 2009-10-14 10:52 PM



Can i be controlled?
This was my last mess up
This lesson i've been told is lost in a sea of confusion
the pride i thought i would feel has left me alone
whats wrong with the world this time
nothing seems to go right even if i begin to try
the dreams are shattered
my dying hope has forgiven the lost hearts of last night
sing me another song to get through the night
dont spit in my face like last time

this tornado has blown down my tragedy
i had hope in mind
what ever happened to the girl of majesty
where's  my hope in mind
what ever happened to the girl of my soul


whats left this time
a girl that has nothing in mind
where will i have stood
if it wasnt next to your side
why do i dream of this lost thought
my eyes giving you all that i have to show


© Copyright 2009 Jared Copeland - All Rights Reserved
GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

1 posted 2009-10-15 11:13 PM


This is very beautiful!!!
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