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suthern
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0 posted 2009-10-13 09:43 AM


Your face fills my heart as I wake each morn
Before these eyes open or thoughts are born
There is you, there is want. But a cold bed
Stretches at my side - you're just in my head

Your hands give me shivers, as in the shower
I turn to hold you, anxious to devour
The pleasures I know you offer to me
But I’m alone and my life is empty.

Your arms coax me away from kitchen sink
With warm breath on my neck I cannot think
You star in my dreams, give song to my soul
You mold me, complete me - you make me whole

I’d sell my soul for the taste of your kiss
You feel so real, how can you not exist?


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brneyedgrly
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1 posted 2009-10-13 12:19 PM



I’d sell my soul for the taste of your kiss
You feel so real, how can you not exist?
_________

those damn ghosts  

enjoyed this


Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2009-10-13 03:51 PM


This is powerful suthern.

Very warm in here.

GBride
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3 posted 2009-10-13 06:56 PM


Somehow, after seeing your picture, I can't imagine you being alone unless you want to be.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2009-10-13 07:16 PM


Bittersweet to the bone. I loved it!
suthern
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5 posted 2009-10-14 09:22 AM


brneyedgrly: I'm glad you enjoyed! *S* A vivid imagination and a boring life... ghosts are inevitable. *G* Thank you! *S*

Chalmette Guy: Thank you so much! *S* Warm is good... right? LOL

GBride: I thank you, kind sir. *S*

Lori: Thank you very much! *S*

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2009-10-15 07:07 AM


I love your response to Shellie.   But a boring life can bring about some wonderful fantasy~~

shouldn't  be laughing slightly at the thought but I have that same very boring personal life.

have a hug...and hope you are well

M

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7 posted 2009-10-15 07:11 AM


ms suthern...you know so well what we do with our ghosts and how they seem to enjoy us exercising them..
martiniat8
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8 posted 2009-10-15 07:16 AM


yeah, this is exactly the kind of thing I just wrote about in my poem Cat Nap, and I hadn't even read this yet. This feeling must be contagious right now, something in the air, like a Cold Moon
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9 posted 2009-10-15 11:00 AM


Wow,  I feel so much from this poem,  so intense, and such longing, these thing I often write about and know of.

I hear you, and understand this poem so well..

Very nice indeed,
Tracey

suthern
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10 posted 2009-10-19 08:27 AM


nakdthoughts: Laugh away, my friend... it's better than crying! *S* Thank you so much... and hugs back to you! *S*

DS: LOL @ exercising our ghosts... now that's a workout plan I could embrace! LOL Thank you!

martini: I'll look for your poem. *S* Thanks for the read! *S*

Tracey: Getting a wow from you makes my day... thank you so much! *S*

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