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metal sins |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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 we were chasing our demons with mutual admiration perhaps wanting to exchange them for more or at least with each other on those sundays after church when sinning could start over again just in search of some other kind of heaven where there was upright metal to hold us in position while the world pressed against our faces like the bosom of an insatiable lover doing temptation and then hanging on to us for the ride of our lives around curves that were not intended for freedom and we would push back on what used to be painful and take it all the way into our imagination slowly I did it mostly to show you it was not so bad and you did it mostly for me to hear your sounds when you found how it fit to be almost holy but were still close enough to say oh hell yes when we let the metal inside the leather of our souls _____________ daark (highway series) photoart "metal sins" by Dark Stranger |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I completely and utterly like this poem and the images that mirror my life. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I could drown in that last verse and sink with a smile on my face... superb work!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
CG, humble thanks guy, I appreciate the read. ______________ Ms suthern, thank you for getting it all over you babe. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
hungry for the meat of your words hot off the flame a taste of wind you're never the same |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
and then hanging on to us for the ride of our lives around curves that were not intended for freedom and we would push back on what used to be painful and take it all the way into our imagination slowly ____________ like this and am smiling with suthern over the last verse too  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms LG, thank you for being a syllabic carnivore...it is a pleasure to serve your appitite. ______________ ms browneyes, I enjoy the sensation of your eyes as they are slippery from the whet attention you give my humble scribbles, thanks babe |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Some curves can't be broken either - you bring a gift with your poetry. Often taking me to a place that once was foreign, but is growing more familiar with each of your poems. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you little one..I enjoy you coming along |
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