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anniepimm54
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0 posted 2009-10-09 07:46 AM


     
Never Love Only Me!

Black is the night, but all I see is sunshine,
blue is the only thing, I see in your eyes
music I hear, when you speak to me
only I know, that you exist in the dark
starlight has never seemed so wonderful
as it dances on your skin with delight
the moon shines in your raven black hair
your eyes shine like a sky full of sun rays
never in my dreams did I chance to meet
the wonder of a creature such as you
love seeks you out where ever you may be
to surely melt the hearts of man or beast
no man can resist your wild seductive charms
as love always seek you, and holds you in it's arms.

Annie
9-10-2009

[This message has been edited by anniepimm54 (10-10-2009 12:58 PM).]

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2009-10-09 08:05 AM


a pleasure to read your heartspeak ms
anniepimm54
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2 posted 2009-10-09 08:19 AM


Thank you very much   I appreciate you reading it...
GBride
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3 posted 2009-10-10 12:00 PM


Quite romantic, flows well, a well conceived and executed piece.
Please write some more like this!!!

brneyedgrly
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nowhere and everywhere
4 posted 2009-10-10 12:24 PM



I enjoyed this very much  


anniepimm54
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5 posted 2009-10-10 12:55 PM


Thank you G Bride that's lovely of you to say so...
brneyedgrly thank you for your feed back it is much appreciated

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2009-10-10 03:54 PM


Oh Annie.. what a pleasure to read! I love your writing style.. you hold such talent in your pen... very much enjoyed!

love and bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

anniepimm54
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7 posted 2009-10-10 05:30 PM


Awww Thank you RDB that's lovely of you to say so
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