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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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mistress of wanting to need the water songs did you stand on your tiptoes again there at that gypsy whisper mirror of dawn did you step down from your stallion and gather your hem splay in hands and hurry your soul to our worshiping place was there not laughter in your eyes when you saw the leather of my yearning and bathed your skin in my fingering strum was it your sighs on those our windows that were as tears washing away a blush tears that were healing to loves' mystery and another residue of our consummated heaven ______________ daark (do of water) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you do consummate so well in a final thrust until you must pull out until next time |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
was it your sighs on those our windows that were as tears washing away a blush tears that were healing to loves' mystery My sighs are for your words... exquisite beauties that they are. *S* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I thought I had already sighed enough today, dear D., but I do welcome a second helping caused by your exquisitely woven soothing and stirring words! This is both passionate and delicately sensitive. Such a Master you are! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inki, thank you for gripping my word edges with your eyes.. _____________ ms suthern, thanks babe for the touch here _______________ ms mar, thank you for wearing this kind of brittle in your thoughts |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This just reads lightly on my mind ... it's beautiful. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you little one. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Interesting read, Dark Stranger.  ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you AW.. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
DK I’m surprised you haven’t melted my monitor into a quivering puddle of ecstasy....yet ~L |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms LG...perhaps I just need to linger longer and see what weeps? thank you ms |
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Werd Na Rumboe Junior Member
since 2009-10-13
Posts 21 |
mistress of wanting to need the water songs did you stand on your tiptoes again there at that gypsy whisper mirror of dawn i read that "need" in line one as "kneed", as in to press, and it seemed still to work nice poem mister. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Werd..knead would work yes,,but this was intended as wanting to need..more of a craving of an addiction. Thanks for the review!! |
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