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Open Poetry #45

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naturegirl
Member

since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

0 posted 2009-10-05 06:49 PM

goldfinches liquid song
car horns sounding
all day long
bees sipping nectar
from delicate blooms
spiders weaving homes
like silken rooms

butterflies flitting high
dancing in tandem
sunlit leaves falling
breeze blown,random
swifts fly screaming
sunlight slowly descends
dogs doze,dreaming

time gradually transcends

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

1 posted 2009-10-05 07:03 PM

lovely poem...
the wonders of nature...
Ah! They touch the heart..

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2009-10-06 12:01 PM

I see why you call yourself naturegirl.
Beautiful poem.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-10-06 11:37 AM

Very very lovely. Your awareness of your surroundings is beautifully expressed.

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2009-10-10 01:49 AM

So beautiful. How can I resist a poem written by a naturegirl. You did not disappoint one bit.

Alison

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

5 posted 2009-10-28 10:29 AM

bees sipping nectar
from delicate blooms
spiders weaving homes
like silken rooms

this is wonderful!

but i sometines wonder if those rooms are cocoons

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