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meljo
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since 2009-09-24
Posts 10
CA, USA

0 posted 2009-10-02 11:04 PM


When will it be,
For her to smile again?
When will it be,
For the sun to shine again?
She wakes up each day,
Feeling vast emptiness,
A black hole
Not caring about anything or anyone,
Not knowing what she is going to do today,
Does it matter,
Whether she lives or dies?
Is today any different,
From any other day?
No
Why would it be?
She doesn't even feel hungry,
Or even too much pain
But some times the numbness,
Keeps coming back again
And for some brief moment,
She feels nothing
Perhaps it's better this way
And then all of sudden,
Tears comes rushing down her face
The deep grinding pain,
Ripping through her heart again

-- Dedicated to my dear friend who'd lost her son recently. 10/2/2009



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brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
1 posted 2009-10-03 10:16 PM



this is sad and beautiful

welcome to pip


naturegirl
Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168
England
2 posted 2009-10-05 05:29 PM


Hi I'm a new here too-a lovely poem, but very sad.
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3 posted 2009-10-05 09:31 PM


So heartbreaking... my heart goes out to your friend!
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