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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2009-10-02 07:57 AM


my leather is more friendly now  
how it fits my intentions
more than my unintentional

like the old dog highways
that I would return to
and leave boot prints

like breath on windows
in those soft shoulders
that never were women

it is often the tall trees
that are the fellows of my youth
that gather and bring frozen time

where we were on the sun side
and found endless strings
with which we could mend

our hounds of brick and metal


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daark  (owgish, highway series)

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-10-02 05:43 PM


quote:
it is often the tall trees
that are the fellows of my youth
that gather and bring frozen time



Such absolutely awesome imagery you gift us with.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-10-02 06:27 PM


ms mar...thanks to you gracious lady friend
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2009-10-14 04:07 PM


my leather is more friendly now  
how it fits my intentions
more than my unintentional

Concrete images soft as chamois
Meanings as layered as the rings of the redwoods

vandana
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4 posted 2009-10-14 05:40 PM


enjoyed
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-10-15 07:12 AM


ms LG...thanks lady

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ms van, thanks much lady

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