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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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that slow motion time that makes us both want to hurry and push it down completely leaving bare the moments with their damp ends and beginnings sizing each other up and down and then adjusting to the size that makes us both hope it hurts more so we can say we suffered just a little but we know it will just burn lovely and there will be insatiable then all over our mouths and minds like the residue of a rain storm when it fills the valley sides and makes them leave memory prints even on the stones that worship there ___________ daark (do of water) |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
in the valley rain, she grew wet from standing there for a glimpse of him. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi.. you whet my smile babe! thank you for looking |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
like the residue of a rain storm when it fills the valley sides ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So nice, DS. Love those quiet streaming lines. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy..thanks babe, I enjoy your eyes |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That "slow motion time" is captured beautifully and your poetic rain falls so refreshingly off the page. I got a glimpse of a rainbow too ... Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks babe!! |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
but we know it will just burn lovely _______ nice  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"that slow motion time" ~ Aw, yes. "that makes us both want to hurry"~ OH, YESSS!  Linda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes, thanks ms ______________ ms ea...thanks lady friend..take your time hurrying? |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
…damp beginnings and endings….and all the steamy in betweens. ..Like a stone I worship at the mountain of your work. ~L |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms LG, I am grateful for your consideration of this, thank you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks van |
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