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anniepimm54
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0 posted 2009-09-30 05:50 AM



Forever Dark

Evening! and the song of the birds dies away,
and the first light of the moon shines through the clouds
the night brings solace, a sense of cold to my bones
I sit here on my porch, waiting for the night air to strike
and once again he hasn't come my lover of the night,

A scream in the dark makes my heart skip a beat
he is here! I can feel him, so close like a flash of light
he is beside me his hot breath on the nape my neck
at last he has come to take me to the place of the undead
And he and I will live forever in the dark.

Annie

26-09-2009

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2009-09-30 07:18 AM


ms annie..well I must review this for the title alone..(grin)  enjoyed it much!!
anniepimm54
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2 posted 2009-09-30 07:27 AM


Thank you Dark Stranger, I am happy you liked it  

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2009-10-02 01:00 AM


That's enough to get you going!!!
Enjoyed your dark tale of passion...and the vampire pic to go with it!!  

Hehe, very good.

anniepimm54
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4 posted 2009-10-09 07:48 AM


Thank you BluesSerenade I guess it isn't to everyone's taste "no pun intended"
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