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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-09-29 10:17 AM

If I were a star in your heaven,
would you not see me there?
maybe covered by the whistful clouds,
does the northern star have your gaze?,

High above dreams and wishes,
I wait for you to call upon me,
notice that I twinkle, for you?,
golden, beaming incandescent light.

Magical, wonderful thoughts I think,
perched high above you in night sky,
thoughts of your love reaching me,
noticing me in this huge universe,

Pin my name on your glowing heart,
allow me to shine only for you,
my magic stardust I will sprinkle,
upon your lips, into your heart,

Up, Up, into the night sky,
way high, way high,
beyond your human eye,
love waits, call my name,

I'll come floating by,

I'm you star....make a wish!
your dreams will come true....

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

1 posted 2009-09-29 10:39 AM

Pin my name on your glowing heart,

~my favorite line..pretty words, as always

shel

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-09-29 12:48 PM

I agree with brneyed...really beautiful thoughts and words expressed here.

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2009-09-29 06:23 PM

Well, now, you've got me singing like Jiminy Cricket, "When you wish upon a star ... da, Da, da, Da, da, Da, Da"

(Smiles)

When You Wish Upon A Star

... though, seriously, I am a Romanic at heart, I am, I am, and, so, I really did enjoy your poem and I did feel your longing and emptiness and felt sad about the idea of your being but a single star in the universe of your Love. How sad, but, even though, I can still picture the imagery of your poem very clearly and I can, most definitely, imagine it being true.

Shine bright, Romantic Heart! Shine bright!

-Bob

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2009-09-29 06:43 PM

AMAZING WORK!!!!

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2009-09-30 05:39 PM

Lovely...James

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-10-04 12:16 PM

Pin my name on your glowing heart,
allow me to shine only for you,

This is so lovely! *S*

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