Love That's Led By Fate (HexSonnetta PW)

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Open Poetry #45

Love That's Led By Fate (HexSonnetta PW)

rachaelfuchsberger

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since 2007-02-21

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Las Vegas, NV

0 posted 2009-09-26 07:04 PM

I love that dark black hair
I'm lost in deep blue eyes
So drop your hard disguise
That pain my heart will spare
As if it's life's surprise

You hid for quite a while
The nature of your heart
And made it hard to start
I had to use my wile
To make you laugh and smile
To have the lover's part

And now we celebrate
Our love that's led by fate

Arana Darkwolf

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2009-09-26 10:13 PM

Beautifully done, Rachael

rachaelfuchsberger

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since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

2 posted 2009-09-26 10:39 PM

Thank you, good Sir.

Arana Darkwolf

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

3 posted 2009-09-28 12:29 PM

rachael

I celebrate your meter success

very nice job

shellie

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2009-09-28 07:20 PM

Fine writing...James

rachaelfuchsberger

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since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

5 posted 2009-09-28 09:36 PM

Brneyedgrly, thank you. I did a little happy dance when I found out I got that one right on the first try.

James, I am glad you enjoyed it.

Arana Darkwolf

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-10-04 12:09 PM

Beautiful work! *S* I like this very much.

rachaelfuchsberger

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since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

7 posted 2009-10-04 12:24 PM

Thank you, suthern.

Arana Darkwolf

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