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brneyedgrly
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0 posted 2009-09-25 02:41 PM




may I always have
more of a life
than the behind the scenes
puzzle piecers

may I always tap
my own inspiration
and never have the need
or ever use the reason

to send invasive
hurtful words
to harm another soul

and call it poetry


.

God bless..



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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-09-25 02:53 PM


God bless you, ss! You truly do have the heart and soul ~ and pen ~ of a poet.

"Sticks and stones may break our bones" ~ but names still hurt!

Giving you a big soul sisterly hug,

Lindy



Marchmadness
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2 posted 2009-09-25 06:41 PM


You are not only an excellent poet but a good person as well, Shellie.
                                 Ida

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2009-09-25 06:43 PM


You are not only an excellent poet but a good person as well, Shellie.
                              Ida

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-09-25 07:16 PM


I am sorry that you felt the need to write this prayer, but I know it comes from your sensitive heart. You are a most beautiful soul and poetess and what you express here is no doubt an important reminder to be kind to each other.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2009-09-25 08:23 PM


You are so right, just like you said in your email women need to stick together not against eachother!

~Hugs

ARh

brneyedgrly
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6 posted 2009-09-26 12:05 PM



thanks, linda, ida, rita and millette

yes, this is just a reminder

to be kind to one another

and for everyone to mind

their own business

love to you, sisters

        


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2009-09-28 07:00 PM


Nice...James
Oklahoma Rose
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8 posted 2009-09-28 08:01 PM


I'm with you, Shellie. It seems like some people get a kick out of sending such invasive hurtful words to others. I experienced this from someone, not long ago. And, I can't stand a phoney. It's good to see you.
Artic Wind
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9 posted 2009-09-28 09:47 PM


Beautifully said, grly. Every word came from the wisdom of your heart.

Your poetic soul shall never be touched with such negativity dear one.

An important message is in every line of this strong poem, that no one should dwell on what's in the past, but only think and embrace the happiness to come. Why should others fill each other with such sadness and problems of their own? Move on, love your life.

to you for this wonderful post
ARCTIC WIND

brneyedgrly
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10 posted 2009-09-29 07:07 AM



thanks james

____________

thanks sue


brneyedgrly
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11 posted 2009-09-29 07:09 AM



aw

wow..that is more words than every reply from you so far put together..thank you so much for your kind words..they made me smile

hugs to you back

    


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12 posted 2009-10-03 01:59 AM


I like the message of this poem.  I have been in groups on line that have died over the ugly exchanges between members.  It is stupid and hurtful.  You said it well, Shellie.

You are one classy poet.

xoxoox
Alison

brneyedgrly
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13 posted 2009-10-03 01:27 PM



thanks baby girl..

you are a class act yourself

love ya


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