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abhursty
Junior Member
since 2009-02-25
Posts 45
0 posted 2009-09-24 07:36 AM

by the ice angel
she told me i can post it all i want so here i am posting away

I'll make you cry
don't ask me why
not for being bad,
or making me sad
not for climbing my back,
not for the faith you lack
as God's tears are rain,
yours are chronic pain
you need to cry
don't ask me why
the tears you will shed,
will keep gathering pieces
of my heart that you shred
cleaning out your soul,
washing away you sins,
eliminating them all,
exposing your grin
© Copyright 2009 Abigail Hurst - All Rights Reserved
GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538
1 posted 2009-09-24 06:38 PM

Very Nice
Balladeer
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2 posted 2009-09-28 10:43 PM

I'm afraid the ice angel told you wrong. Our rules are specific that poets may post their original work only. Please refer to our guidelines when you have a question.
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