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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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0 posted 2009-09-24 04:36 AM


(Was reading a few comments on youtube about one of the pop-stars. Started to wonder how life would be falling in love with a star. This is what I wrote)

I'm in love with a girl on the Silver Screen
and
It's me that shes never seen
Will it
Be the beginning or the end
For the
Romance, complexity of the bend
In the
Social classes, my right to defend
My
Heart, feelings and its kin
So
You see my problem, my lovely sin
You
Won't notice me so I wrote a book- What then.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2009-09-24 07:14 AM


Interesting take on being in love.

Our need for love is often lived by being in love with love and that can be stirred in many ways.

Love,
M

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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2 posted 2009-09-24 03:06 PM


Thank you, it was more a take on the comment itself then anything.
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