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Open Poetry #45

This light, goodnight

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-09-23 06:18 PM

you leave me
in flattened fields
with rummaged lots
where sparrows peck
between the affluence

of harvests

falling

the trackless flight

remainders of now
but not yet
memoirs of then

truth resonates
around the bend
without face
without fanfare

the heart trembles

strings of your embrace
erase

your sudden flight

this light

goodnight

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-24-2009 09:38 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2009-09-24 06:29 AM

this: "you leave me
in flattened fields
in rummaged lots
where sparrows peck
between the affluence"

and then this: "truth resonates
around the bend
without face"...

excellent writing

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-09-24 07:11 AM

Fantastic imagery and deep emotion conveyed, dear Michele.

Love,
Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2009-09-24 08:07 AM

thank you dear ladies

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2009-09-24 08:23 AM

"you leave me
in flattened fields
with rummaged lots
where sparrows peck
between the affluence"

~ Shame on him! Doesn't he know a goddess when he sees one!!!

Gawd, girl, can you ever write!

EA to the rescue! I'll carry you to green pastures!

Linda

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