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The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
Posts 493
EL, Michigan

0 posted 2009-09-22 05:50 PM



Pepsi-Cola loops
through
the haze filled smog-
a migraine streaming
in
real
time.

Boring rants:
the mutters
of a madman-
transmit nuances about sleep
for the listening pleasure
of my psyche.

As I, like lead,
blink.
A stupor gradually
embeds itself
into
my
stream of consciousness.

Bike induced jet lag
settles.
(Inducing an untimely,
yet appreciated
necessity for sleep)


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-23 04:01 PM


Perfect! Enjoyed your reflections.

Love,
Margherita

The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
Posts 493
EL, Michigan
2 posted 2009-09-23 04:05 PM


Perhaps I should have been reflecting on my psych class more constructively but what can I say. I felt the urge to write.
Thanks for taking the time to comment Margherita.

J.

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