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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-09-22 04:55 PM


         Autumn Prelude

In these final hours
of Summer passing
to that magic nether land of
fine warm memories and dreams,
red maple leaves whirl
in a wide, wild wind
that whispers with
the voice of Autumn
to a deepening grey and
  brooding sky…
all is transience and change.

                 --- b. e. adams (9/22/09)


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-09-22 05:14 PM


Dear Bard Bruce, your prelude to Autumn is lovely.

"In these final hours
of Summer passing
to that magic nether land of
fine warm memories and dreams,"

~ What a lovely thought.

"red maple leaves whirl
in a wide, wild wind
that whispers with"

~ I'm a sucker for alliteration! It sounds so musical. lol

May your autumn be as wondrous as your poem!

Giving you a warm, autumnal hug,

Linda

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2 posted 2009-09-22 05:16 PM


Happy Autumn To you Bruce!

There is always magic in your autumn words!

~ARH

brneyedgrly
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3 posted 2009-09-22 05:49 PM



that whispers with
the voice of Autumn
to a deepening grey and
  brooding sky…
all is transience and change.
__________

really felt these words

        


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4 posted 2009-09-22 07:46 PM


Autumn is a magical reminder,
nothing stays the same.
A fine penning Bruce.

Margherita
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5 posted 2009-09-23 04:05 PM


Love that "brooding sky" that is part of the prelude ...

Very beautiful, dear Bruce!

Love,
Margherita

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