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anniepimm54
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0 posted 2009-09-22 09:15 AM



     

New Mothers Sonnet

Let me memorize your face,
the colour of your eyes, the softness of your hair.
the glowing and iridescence of your skin,
the sparkle in your smile
that lets me know you love me from within

The closeness we have! cant be shared,
the bond we have! cant be broken
the connection we have is real
and the joy we have is without question.

The excitement on your face when,
I walk into the room
the joy you show just to be near me
the love you give is unconditional
I know this was meant to be.

No one could ever replace you,
my soul is yours alone
I would give my life to protect you
my beautiful baby girl, my own..


Annie

22-9-2009


[This message has been edited by anniepimm54 (09-23-2009 07:04 PM).]

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2009-09-22 11:51 AM


ms annie...this is a perfect celebration!!


anniepimm54
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2 posted 2009-09-22 11:55 AM


Aww Thank you i am glad you liked it
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-09-22 12:11 PM


Written as only a mother could write ~ and one who has the gift of writing!

Tender ~ and ever so precious...


Linda


anniepimm54
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4 posted 2009-09-23 02:58 AM


Thank you Linda, thats nice of you to say so
Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2009-09-23 01:25 PM


You have painted a beautiful picture here. A mother's bond can never truly be broken. I enjoyed this Annie.

Best wishes,
/Kit

anniepimm54
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6 posted 2009-09-23 02:30 PM


Thank you Kit
LindsayP
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7 posted 2009-09-23 11:30 PM



Dear Annie, that sonnet is a real pleasure to read and I congratulate you on your

beautiful baby girl. God has answered your prayers. May the sun always shine upon you and your little girl. Love and a big hug.

Lindsay

anniepimm54
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8 posted 2009-09-24 04:18 AM


Thank you Lindsay, she is my Granddaughter
her name is Abby-Leigh Elizabeth
but watching my Daughter with her the other day
it reminded me of the bond that me and my three daughters have.

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