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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2009-09-22 08:30 AM




Today you find me
In the Jardins des Plantes
Sitting on a bench in the sun
It is peaceful and calm
Away from tourists
And the like
In the distance Le Pompiers
Still scream their Parr-dons
Along Rue Monge
But here inside this sanctuary
There is a quietness
Just me and the sun gods
The humming of the bees
And the flowers and the trees
and it’s here I give thanks for my day...


Bisous de Paris
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2009 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 110

1 posted 2009-09-22 09:20 AM


This sounds just perfect
the type of place i love,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts
But here inside this sanctuary
There is a quietness
Just me and the sun gods
The humming of the bees
And the flowers and the trees
and it’s here I give thanks for my day...


Annie

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2009-09-22 11:51 AM


ms r&b, it is a pleasure to watch you smile there
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-09-22 12:08 PM


Dear Roneice, Paris is bringing out the best in you. I totally adore this!

Thank you for this meditative moment. I am saving it and will return to it often, to be sure. Awwww, the pause that refreshes.



Lindy Lou


Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2009-09-22 03:24 PM


Dear Roniece, sounds like you have had yet another wonderful day in Paris, the sun Gods love you for sure. A very nice write my friend, very much enjoyed.

Rick

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2009-09-23 05:28 PM


You really know how to enjoy your moments and you even don't forget to express your gratitude.

Wonderful, dear Roniece. (so the bees would make me a little bit anxious, but thanks God also for them!!)

Bisous de Rome.
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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6 posted 2009-09-23 07:10 PM


another absolutely grand-fine slice of Parisian Impressionism!

MUCH (sustained) applause for this 'penning' !!

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
7 posted 2009-09-23 10:22 PM



Roniece my dear, you are making me feel envious but I'm sure that you are only

getting what you deserve. much enjoyed.
Love and a big hug.

Lindsay

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
8 posted 2009-09-23 10:59 PM


What a lovely, peaceful poem, Roniece.
                                Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2009-09-24 07:26 PM


Nice...James
Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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Oklahoma USA
10 posted 2009-09-24 11:24 PM


Sounds like a very nice place to be, Roniece. Mind if I join you?
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