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zaaclindsay
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since 2009-08-12
Posts 111
Ottawa Ontario

0 posted 2009-09-22 04:15 AM



Wish I could say
it’s just the mood I’m in.
Wish I could see that far.
Just standin here,
hangin out on the corner
of my heart.

Tryin to bide my time.
Tryin to close my eyes,
and stop this turnin'
turnin' round.

Wanna reach out in the silence,
and take some for myself.
Wanna find the piece that’s missing,
and make it larger than life
for just little while.

Don’t get me wrong,
I’m not unhappy.
Don’t get me wrong,
Just need a moment for myself.
Don’t wanna run and hide.
I just need the night;
just need to tell my heart
that it’ alright

I’d like to think
there’s still a chance for me out there.
I wanna' look into the lights
to find my innocence lookin' back at me
thru eyes not quite so scared.

Hope this is the time...
gotta be this time.
To stop this turnin'
turnin' round

Still reaching back for visions
I’ve had since I was young;
to find the dream that’s missing,
and make it larger than life...

for just a little while.

Don’t get me wrong,
I’m not unhappy.
Don’t get me wrong,
just a little melancholy
'round my heart.
Don’t wanna run and hide.
I just need some time;
just need to tell my heart
That its alright.

I kept wondering why that frisbee kept getting bigger and bigger....and then it hit me.

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anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 110

1 posted 2009-09-22 09:38 AM


This could quite easily be a song as well
Excellently writen
Annie

brneyedgrly
Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
2 posted 2009-09-22 05:31 PM



Just standin here,
hangin out on the corner
of my heart.
______________

yes..you are  

very nice  


zaaclindsay
Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 111
Ottawa Ontario
3 posted 2009-09-22 05:52 PM


thank you brneyedgrl.  you seem to be quite the interesting and intriguing...and i like your work.

zaac

I kept wondering why that frisbee kept getting bigger and bigger....and then it hit me.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2009-09-22 07:52 PM


Nice work, reads like a song as well!

Shellie is all that and more! I agree!

ARH

haha just read your statement, the punctuation nazi's very funny!


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