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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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sides of me are unseen secret pockets hiding pennies zippered then snapped like locked-up diaries pockets holding words that write my stories even smiles and laughter spent-up tokens, echoing but mostly just filled with worries bursting seams, overflowing sometimes, by my choice I share these sides of me a handful of coins these sacred memories and I trust that they will hold the marked-up value of gold and not depreciate suddenly to the irredeemable qualities of patina covered pennies in your pockets (released) . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear ss, that is a unique way at looking at one's self and one's memories! Very creative! A pocket-full of your pennies are worth their weight in gold!  Enjoyed this delightful sharing or yourself! To know you ~ is to love you!   Linda |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
An interesting and endearing perspective. It serves to remind me, that every person I meet is a composite soul of many facets. One never truly knows another; there is always one more pocket, one more nook, or one more cranny to be explored. Lovely write. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brneyedgrly - your words and thoughts are amazing... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Aww geez girly, love this little beauty!! A penny for your thoughts hardly seems fitting, but it seems to fit! Uh wait a minute... does that make any sense? You know what I mean don't you! |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
ooh, I really like this one, very clever metaphor and cleverly done. maybe I should call you, Money Penney, oh to know those secrets and that they come so cheap ;-) |
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zaaclindsay Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 111Ottawa Ontario |
wow, sometimes i think we are twins from different mothers. you have a very longing quality to your writing that I'm familiar with...probably too much so. Very nice piece. zaac I kept wondering why that frisbee kept getting bigger and bigger....and then it hit me. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes a pleasure to see your change exposed.. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
now don't go spending that treasure all in one place lol.... a brilliant piece of poetry here... enjoy your ponderings! Keep them coming! ~ARH |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
but mostly just filled with worries bursting seams, overflowing. Shellie my dear girl just make sure you keep those pockets buttoned up tight so the worries won't get out. Interesting post, love. Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A fantastic write, dear Shellie! Love your reflections! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
We should always treasure all our pennies and never think of them as different.loved the poem. Love Esha |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thank you all so much  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love the parts that you show us. You writing always captures me and makes me feel as I have had a wonderful glimpse of you. A |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thanks girly |
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