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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-09-21 07:40 AM


you had those day dreams on, loose fitting
I loved how your eyes were soft sound glances
and your skin was so nearly helpless
when you asked my arms to be your only warmth

and you said you loved how the chills felt
when there was a man place for you to step into
to compare the sensations you mentioned
of wanting more then needing, and needing that

my eyes were closed when I touched your lip seams
and you kept changing them around to tease me
like you wanted me to know them every way you did
before I sipped some of the residue you left there

and you spilled laughter down the front of my mind

______________

daark  (do of sand)

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brneyedgrly
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1 posted 2009-09-21 06:43 PM


and you spilled laughter down the front of my mind



BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2009-09-21 09:49 PM


you had those day dreams on, loose fitting
I loved how your eyes were soft sound glances

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Yea that!!  Gave me the warm fuzzies!!!
Lovin' your sandscapes, DS~

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3 posted 2009-09-22 02:37 AM


May I just say that your poetry tastes so sinfully sweet when I read it?

A

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-09-22 06:18 AM


ms browneyes...thanks for the eyes lady

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ms bluezy, thanks babe, you bring smiles


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ms ali-san, thank you little one for the touch

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5 posted 2009-09-22 02:58 PM


Luscious!
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-09-22 04:07 PM


ms myst..thank you lady friend!!
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7 posted 2009-09-22 05:20 PM


mmmm..tastes sweet...and full of spice!

~ARH

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2009-09-22 05:24 PM


bother!.. Ali-girl stole my words!!
ok, ok, I'll find my own..  delightful and very pleasant on the eyes...

Bisous de Paris
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2009-09-22 09:27 PM


ARH...thanks ms

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ms R*B thanks so much lady

Margherita
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10 posted 2009-09-23 04:12 PM


Masterful. You weaved in a very tangible measure of tenderness and warmth.

Love it. "Simmer wind" how cute!

Love,
Margherita

pretty1
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11 posted 2009-09-24 11:23 AM


The way you put words together are incredibly wonderful!  I especially liked this part - thank you for sharing!!!

Pretty1

my eyes were closed when I touched your lip seams
and you kept changing them around to tease me
like you wanted me to know them every way you did
before I sipped some of the residue you left there

and you spilled laughter down the front of my mind


Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2009-09-24 12:03 PM


ms mar, thank you for the touch

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ms pretty1, thank you for looking out the window at this one

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