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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2009-09-20 09:10 AM


Some more thoughts for my first love..  so nice to have him visit me in dreams..


You smiled upon my Paris night
How nice
How very nice
That you would find me here
It’s been so long
So long
I’m glad to see you’re ok
I have missed your laughter
I have surely missed your smile
Don’t leave it too long next time
I need to know how you are
I simply need to know
I will miss you forever
And forever isn't long enough...


Bisous de Paris
RDB


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (09-20-2009 12:45 PM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-09-20 10:27 AM


Your soul-meeting of the night is poignantly beautiful, dear Roniece.

Such a radiant light in the night to influence also your day.

Love,
Margherita

anniepimm54
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2 posted 2009-09-20 11:26 AM


Awww that's really beautiful
I remember my dad visiting me in my sleep
sadly he hasent been back but i still
Dream in hope
Annie

Rick
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3 posted 2009-09-20 03:22 PM


Dear Roniece, another plea for times to come back to you, lucky your sleeping thoughts are giving you comfort for a short while at least, may they strengthen your memories and keep you happy my friend.

Rick

Oklahoma Rose
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4 posted 2009-09-20 11:01 PM


As usual Roniece, this is beautiful.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2009-09-22 07:04 PM


Wonderful...James
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6 posted 2009-09-22 07:45 PM


This is a poignant write, Roniece, from the heart.
LindsayP
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7 posted 2009-09-23 12:46 PM



Hi Roniece I can see you have some wonderful memories and it is an enjoyable

thing to be able to bring them back in your dreaming. Sweet dreams my dear. love.

Lindsay

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8 posted 2009-09-25 12:53 PM


I bet he smiles when he visits your dreams too.  I bet you have to sleep with the window open on those nights!  

Love you, girly.

A

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