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anniepimm54
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0 posted 2009-09-20 08:51 AM



Dancing in the wind

I am here my love, I still walk with you,
the sadness in your eyes still shows.
be at peace my love,
I still live! here in the heart of you
in your memories, in your smile
and in your every breath I am alive.

The wind carries my love to you,
the rain is me, kissing your cheeks.
the leaves rustling on the trees is my voice,
telling you I am here forever I will not leave.

Come! dance with me one last time,
let me hold you for the time-
that I spend in your thoughts.
feel your feet lighter than air,
and let your mind drift to
the physical love we once shared.

Let your mind allow your lips to smile once more,
at the thought of me here in your arms.
no more tears before bedtime,
no more lonely times spent in decay
smile and be happy and start a brand new day.

Annie
20-09-2009

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-20 10:22 AM


Dear Annie, your most recent offerings, this one included, are truly precious gifts.

Very, very beautiful. Romantic and soothing.

Love,
Margherita

anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
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2 posted 2009-09-20 11:18 AM


Hi Thank you Margherita
I am attempting to use a new style of writing
I am glad there working..

Annie

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2009-09-20 01:49 PM


Dancing in the wind

I am here my love, I still walk with you,
the sadness in your eyes still shows.
be at peace my love,
“I still live! here in the heart of you
in your memories, in your smile
and in your every breath I am alive“.

The wind carries my love to you,
the rain is me, kissing your cheeks.
the leaves rustling on the trees is my voice,
telling you I am here forever I will not leave.

Come! dance with me one last time,
let me hold you for the time-
that I spend in your thoughts.
feel your feet lighter than air,
and let your mind drift to
the physical love we once shared.

Let your mind allow your lips to smile once more,
at the thought of me here in your arms.
no more tears before bedtime,
no more lonely times spent in decay
smile and be happy and start a brand new day.


Oh Annie... this is truly so beautiful.. every line I can relate to...

Bless you for your talent, bless you my lovely friend


Bisous de Paris
RDB xx


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
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4 posted 2009-09-20 01:55 PM


Aww Thank you Roniece,
i am so glad you can take a piece of it with you and hold it to give you sunshine..

brneyedgrly
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nowhere and everywhere
5 posted 2009-09-20 02:46 PM



this is beautiful

        


larzana
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since 2009-09-17
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6 posted 2009-09-20 05:21 PM


All I have to say has already been said but I cannot resist reiterating...beautiful!
anniepimm54
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7 posted 2009-09-20 06:12 PM


Awwww thank you my friends
that so nice of you..

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2009-09-21 04:59 AM


Annie ~you read my mind with this one...

A beautiful love story~

~ARH

anniepimm54
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since 2009-09-03
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9 posted 2009-09-21 06:23 AM


Aww Thank you ARH, I was just thinking of my Daughter when i wrote this, and the fact her husband has been gone now for four years..
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