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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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0 posted 2009-09-20 02:34 AM



I can walk a fine line between love and hate
I can jump in the waters just to test fate
I can be the clown to hide tears behind a smile
I can be a man self-assured but in denial
I can be the one you hate to love
I can be a star, so far above
I can be the skyline, your horizon
I can be your stone, untouched by erosion
I can steal you anything you asked, even the world
I can take the moon no matter how hard it twirled
I can show you the meaning of life
I can give you the reason to end your strife
I can regain your honor at the edge of a knife
I can write you a book that holds no depth
I can write you a poem with no syllables left
I can be the man, you dream about at night
I can be the one, with whom you fight
I can make sure there is no ugliness in sight
I can make your quest turn to plight
I can stop even the wind
I can do this,just to watch you spin
I can do anything you so wished

Difference is.

I wont.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

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GBride
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since 2009-07-02
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1 posted 2009-09-20 07:11 AM


Very cleaver!!!
I could argue that if you won't you can't.
But I'm not going to.
What a clever write. I'm jealous!

larzana
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since 2009-09-17
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2 posted 2009-09-20 05:30 PM


Haha wasn't expecting that! That was very clever, I am jealous as well.
martiniat8
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3 posted 2009-09-20 09:46 PM


"I can write you a poem with no syllables left"
AWESOME LINE!

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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4 posted 2009-09-21 12:52 PM


This one was one of my favorites.

Thank you for your responses.

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