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Will you? |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
If I wrote you a song And sang out of key Would you remember me? I wrote you a poem It meant nothing to me I built you house Just to tear it down I wrote you a poem It was nothing to see I bought you a window So you could see clear What I feel for you Is so sincere So believably true That it lies to my mind One of a kind Such a understatement You'll never be mine I'll find another Just to fake it It is love It is pain It is rhythm It is melody It is... Will you see me in the crowd, will you smile? Will you... "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
If I see you in the rain It won't cause me any pain We have nothing more to gain. For our feelings are the same. Nice write!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Lovely stream of heart talk! Enjoyed it. Love, Margherita |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You would be one to be found in a crowd~ ~ARH  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
so talented for someone so young  |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Thank you so much all of you for your responses. |
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