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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-09-19 07:55 PM


     beautiful ghosts

dark leaves rustle
in a chill Autumn wind
beneath a most uncertain
   moon

who can truly know the
   human heart

and what remains
when love vanishes …
so easily forgotten

              --- b. e. adams (9/19/2009)


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2009-09-19 09:16 PM


Dear Bruce.. I loved every line!

I don't think love ever vanishes.. it may fade a little but never leaves us..

Beautiful offering as always

Bisous de Paris
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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2 posted 2009-09-19 09:19 PM


Wonderful - but I think that love kind of blows around like the leaves and always comes back to grow again.  Yep.  I think that, my Bruce friend.

A

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2009-09-19 10:27 PM


Beautiful ghosts, beautiful poem. In my opinion real love never dies, just changes over time.
                          Ida

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-09-20 10:04 AM


As you write so intensely of it, you have not forgotten ...

Love IS.

Love,
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2009-09-20 01:50 PM


Ghost of past loves...they do haunt and taunt
us...

~Loved it!

~ARH

brneyedgrly
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6 posted 2009-09-20 02:48 PM



dark leaves rustle
in a chill Autumn wind
beneath a most uncertain
   moon

who can truly know the
   human heart

and what remains
when love vanishes …
so easily forgotten
_____________

I really enjoy your writing

          


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2009-09-22 07:02 PM


Enjoyed...James
Alison
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8 posted 2009-09-25 12:46 PM


I had to come back to this poem - it is beautiful, Bruce.

Alison

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