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WTBAKELAR
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0 posted 2009-09-18 11:00 AM


http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/starlite/backgrounds/user041220916.jpg

I didn’t ask for this,
Sometimes life isn’t fair,
My eyes are stuck to each other,
And I have only two strands of hair,

My mustache looks like cat whiskers,
It appears my brain is quite small,
You should try to find pants that fit this physique,
They don’t sell them at Bob’s Big and Tall,

I have been stuck with my fists in the air,
Since I put on this stupid white shirt,
I do have this pretty red power tie,
But my teeth are so big that they hurt,

My creator must have had quite a laugh,
Not knowing how my image would be used,
Now all you out there are writing about me,
I feel cheap and completely abused,

How would you like to go through life?
Looking full of anger and dread?
As round as I am tall, not my fault at all,
With a blue squiggly line floating over my head?




The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

© Copyright 2009 Wm. Tracey Bakelar - All Rights Reserved
larzana
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1 posted 2009-09-18 01:34 PM


I love the teeth line. My perception was that you were talking about the smile you put on. Is that right or wrong?
I am probably just being really dense, but what's the blue squiggly line part mean?

WTBAKELAR
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2 posted 2009-09-18 01:43 PM


Click on the link on the top of the page.
The poem was written about the comic character
Thanks for the comments,
Welcome to PIP.

larzana
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3 posted 2009-09-18 01:54 PM


Oh haha. I feel stupid.
LindsayP
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4 posted 2009-09-20 10:29 PM



You forgot to tell us that it was a nightmare you had Tracy and then you woke

up and found out that you were not like that at all. Enjoyed the post my friend.
Take care.

Lindsay

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5 posted 2009-09-21 05:04 AM


LOL..Lind...laughing at his comment~

Funny...and so is the poem!

~ARH

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6 posted 2009-09-21 09:18 AM



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7 posted 2009-09-21 06:45 PM



nice to see your humorous side tracey

                


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8 posted 2009-09-21 09:26 PM


Lindsay,  thank you for dropping in to look at my bad side,  That's me on a bad day,

take care my friend,
Tracey

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9 posted 2009-09-22 09:19 AM


ARH,  fun to see what people can come up with when given a challenge,  So,  I don't know what my problem is,

Thanks for your kind comments,
Tracey

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10 posted 2009-09-22 09:21 AM


Honeybunch,
brneyedgrly,

Smiles right back at ya.
thanks for your kindness at my blue squigllies.

Love always,
Tracey

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11 posted 2009-10-09 12:03 PM


this was a greart write and funny to read my friend thnaks fod sharing with me Melissia Ann
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12 posted 2009-10-09 12:17 PM


How would you like to go through life?
Looking full of anger and dread?
As round as I am tall, not my fault at all,

But.... but... I do! LOL

I love this and the grins it gives! *S*

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