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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-09-18 07:39 AM



we were those occasional menders of time
in that blending room of windows
the strum dancers of leather moan music
that would cling to our skins after
and make that candy coating residue

you liked to dress in nothing much colors
and just wear my eyes out in public
where you would wear my arms on your shoulder
or around you waist like a lasso
holding you almost wanting to be helpless

there were stallions at our horizons
and you were nervous about their thunder
but the soft soot of their eyes
made you lean into my man cave shadows
you said my spurs were your favorite jewelry

and a scar now and then would be sins early lovely
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daark (do of sand)

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1 posted 2009-09-18 10:51 AM


there were stallions at our horizons
and you were nervous about their thunder
but the soft soot of their eyes

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The poem is wonderful - but those lines are my keepers.  Absolutely beautiful.  Kind of tuck in my purse and read now and then "beautiful".

ali-san

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-09-18 11:58 AM


quote:
you liked to dress in nothing much colors
and just wear my eyes out in public
where you would wear my arms on your shoulder
or around you waist like a lasso
holding you almost wanting to be helpless



Nothing like arms that know how to hold ... how delicately and captivatingly you said this! Tender power, a fantastic combination.

Most enthralling in its whole.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-09-18 12:07 PM


ms ali-san, thank you little one for the eyes and smile

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ms mar, thank you dear lady for your touch

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2009-09-18 01:41 PM


oui, I agree with the girls!  lovely writing Mr Daark..

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Indigo
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5 posted 2009-09-18 02:05 PM


A wise woman once said, "Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose."

Enjoyed this, D.

Indigo


Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-09-18 02:58 PM


ms r&b, thank you lady

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ms indi...and the dolly said..damn I hate ice cubes?  thank you babe

brneyedgrly
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7 posted 2009-09-18 06:43 PM



you said my spurs were your favorite jewelry




Sunshine
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8 posted 2009-09-18 10:00 PM



Ahhh...late night dreams tease me now.



Thank you.

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2009-09-19 06:33 AM


ms browneyes...got boots? thanks babe

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ms sun, it is a pleasure to tease you...just a bit, thanks my friend

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