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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-09-17 07:37 PM

Love Blends

In my pickup
I picked up a woman
down in Cheyenne.
She was just
hanging around
wasting some time
and said she
needed a friend.
She was part Cherokee
and I was part Sioux,
so we figured that two
halfs of an indian
could figure out some
fun things to do.
She made moccasin's,
and I rode rodeo,
while we were touching
each others hearts,
love blended
our souls.

JamesLee
16September
2009

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-09-18 11:21 AM

hello james, I like the style of the poem, funny and romantic, good ingredients.

have a nice day

yann

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-09-18 11:30 AM

James,

This was clever and extraordinary. I particularly love any poem having anything to do with trucks or women, country or chew.

I hope to read more.

Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-09-18 12:04 PM

So lovely, dear James. A casual meeting that ends with soul blending. That's good luck!

Love,
Margherita

larzana
Member

since 2009-09-17

Posts 55

4 posted 2009-09-18 02:05 PM

That was really sweet. For some reason it just made me feel really carefree.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

5 posted 2009-09-18 06:44 PM

always love your little writes

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2009-09-18 08:29 PM

a very interesting 'slice of life' and chance meetings write!

GREAT line:

"we figured that two
halves of an Indian
could figure out some
fun things to do(!)"

applause for this 'penning' !!

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2009-09-19 08:15 AM

WOW! These are great song lyrics!
But if you want to keep it as a poem
it'[s still great!
I love poems that seem like the writeer is living the poem. You have that quality in allof your work
Liz

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2009-09-19 09:08 AM

Hi, James! I concur with all the responses!

I am quoting the following from La Liz's response ~ "I love poems that seem like the writeer is living the poem." ~ Yeppers! Me too! ~ and your poems fit the bill, so to speak!

Linda

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2009-09-19 12:54 PM

I really liked this poem!

ARCTIC WIND

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