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Seasons Return. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Dry paper sounds, evening dropping, scratching leaves bob in the breeze like a new small mammal scurrying quickly from eyes. Robins ticking, finches feasting on autumns seed bounty. Cooler now, all changing. decay pervading freshly blown to senses alive again. Like an old friends return, to vivify, excite. Behind my smile i glow, anticipation of things to come, thoughts, dreams, memories will flood through like streams of silver, meandering, calling me back home to nature, to friends waiting my welcome, no conditions, no expectations, they are as they are, living, colourful,unique. Nature is me, my secret place, it leads me along it's path of wonder and winsomeness, gives me sweet air to gasp at it's inspiring, mesmerising, perfect beauty. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"thoughts, dreams, memories will flood through like streams of silver, meandering, calling me back home to nature, to friends waiting my welcome, no conditions, no expectations" Love this! Thanks for the new 'library' gift! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just wonderful!! thanks for the precious gift Phil... Bisous de Paris RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine 'changing seasons' imagery ... I am especially fond of the ending: "Nature is me, my secret place, it leads me along it's path of wonder and winsomeness, gives me sweet air to gasp at it's inspiring, mesmerizing, perfect beauty." MUCH (sustained) applause for this 'penning'! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Nature is YOU~ APPLAUSE!!!!! wonderful poem deep in meaning~ ~ARH |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Hoping to see more of your autumn poems here~ ~ARH |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Goldenrose - wow, what a terrific writing, well done... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Delightful autumn faire you're serving up! This is just so beautiful, Goldenrose... your word pictures come alive in living color. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
Behind my smile i glow, anticipation of things to come, thoughts, dreams, memories will flood through like streams of silver, meandering, calling me back home to nature, to friends waiting my welcome, no conditions, no expectations, they are as they are, living, colourful,unique. ________ this is very smooth and rich writing..enjoyed |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
I agree with secondhanddreampoet. I think nature is you. You write it so well. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
You need to write a book |
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