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vandana
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0 posted 2009-09-17 12:37 PM





God Gives Us

We may feel hurt sometimes
But some days we don't
Because this called so life
Makes us happy
God sends us love
To share
To make
To take
God gives us some love
to share
To hold
It make us gentle and happy each day
Each way
When there comes a time
To heal
to smile
There 's gotta a lot to say
From brand new day
To makes us smile
Through sunny days
God gives us so much.....

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2009-09-17 12:39 PM


It make us gentle and happy each day
Each way
When there comes a time
To heal
to smile

he does indeed give us so much Vandana.. and you have gifted us well here...

Bisous de Paris
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2009-09-17 02:16 PM


vandana, I'm still smiling as I am keying my reply to your glorious poem!

"God gives us some love
to share
To hold
It make us gentle and happy each day"

~ Amen!

Love & God's Light,

Linda

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2009-09-18 05:41 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Margherita
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4 posted 2009-09-18 07:04 PM


Very beautiful, dear Vandana! And true!

Love,
Margherita

GBride
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5 posted 2009-09-18 07:07 PM


Excellent!!!
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