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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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0 posted 2009-09-16 01:20 AM


I'm falling even more in love with you
I'm losing all my faith
I'm forgetting my path on the road to glory
I'm falling even more in love with you
I'm losing all my faith
I'm forgetting my path on the road to glory

I'm losing all that is to lose
I'm loving none that I can
I'm lost in a world of light

My eyes closed
Suns too bright
When you come by

My mind is dark and damp
That is why I lie
To make you smile
To make you come by
So I can close my eyes
To be forgotten

My mind plays tricks on me
My mind plays tricks on me
My mind plays tricks on me
My mind plays tricks on me

How silly of me
To have my mind
Play tricks on me

It says you love me too
It says you love me too

It says to write on the walls
In scripture so beautiful
You'll come running
Into my arms
It says you love me too

My mind plays tricks on me
I'm falling more in love with you
Suns too bright
I close my eyes
To be forgotten
That is why I lie

It says to write on the walls

Scripture so beautiful

It says to write on the walls

How silly of me.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-09-16 06:00 AM


And in a certain way you dared to write it on the walls of Pipland and ... that wasn't a silly idea at all. I believe it is never silly to confess love, even if we have that subtle fear of not being requited.

You did this in a captivating way.

Love,
Margherita

GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

2 posted 2009-09-16 05:45 PM


You write the best poetry ever!!!
N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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3 posted 2009-09-16 06:56 PM


Thank you very much
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