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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2009-09-15 06:18 PM



My failure has brought me to this shame
Lingering deep within is this haunting pain
No longer is felt what once was mine

From the darkest depths a heart again will climb

To only be forever lost within the tides
Immortalized in the sands of time.

{from the immortal journals}



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jwesley
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1 posted 2009-09-15 07:24 PM


Hah! More like ..."imortalized in the hearts like mine", my friend....

enjoyed...

j.

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2009-09-15 07:28 PM


Ha Jimmy, this'n isn't about me in particular but from a different project I'm involved in for fun.     I'm sure there will be more little snippets from it to come yet.  Nice to see you hon!
jwesley
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3 posted 2009-09-15 09:10 PM


and still...

Hah! More like ..."imortalized in the hearts like mine", my friend....

because you are who you are, to me!

j.

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2009-09-15 09:14 PM


muwahh Jimmy!!  Hugs you!!  and thank you.
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5 posted 2009-09-16 05:57 AM


Beautifully expressed,  poignant heart-journey, dear Donna!

Love,
Margherita

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6 posted 2009-09-18 01:18 AM


.. and this poem has heart to help us find our way to climb again.  A keeper for sure, darlin'.

xoxoox
A

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2009-09-18 07:01 AM


Enjoyed your words, Donna and agree with Jimmy even if it is only a "project".

Hope all is well~~

M

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