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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2009-09-15 09:42 AM



You do what you do so well, dear friend
You do what you do so well
I knew you would do with your mystical pen
What no other poet can do, in the end
You do what you do on these pages of blue
What no other poet can do

Your pen has a passionate intimate touch
A passionate intimate touch
And no other poet has written as such
The verses a woman relates to so much
You pour out your ink on these pages of blue
And that’s when you do what you do

What I’m saying is right, it’s such a delight
My perception is truer than true
Your words are like Butterflies out of the blue
And I am truly indebted to you
For being a gentleman right from the start
While spilling the contents and depth of your heart
It seems all the others are loving it too

We just love what you do
         when you do what you do!


Keep writing, Mr Charles
We'll keep tasting the wine
Liz

© Copyright 2009 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-09-15 10:07 AM


"Think I'm in Love with Bill Charles" ~ aren't we all?!?

Lovely, Liz, I love what he does and how he does it too! ~ and btw, dear poetess, I love what you do and how you do it too!!!

In fact, I love both of you and what you do, so I would love to see you two du-et together!!!

  

Linda

deleeme
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2 posted 2009-09-15 11:28 AM


What a lovely piece of honoring and praising a beloved poet here. He must be blushing at all your gushing---But it is all good!  Even wonderful!

I thank the LORD everyday
He has given me something to say
And to share with others,
My Friends, my sisters, my brothers!

To God Be the Glory!

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2009-09-15 03:48 PM


Strong friendship!


ARCTIC WIND

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2009-09-15 06:07 PM


Smiling at your words Liz, because they are so true~~

M

Balladeer
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5 posted 2009-09-15 06:55 PM


Bill Charles again????? He gets ALL the girls!

(maybe 'cause he's so darned talented)

jwesley
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6 posted 2009-09-15 07:22 PM


yep, talented he is (and so are you, my friend) but just can't bring myself to see him like you do...

I'm not in love with him...

sorry Bill...


j.

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7 posted 2009-09-15 07:35 PM


This is lyrical and fun and I am sure Mr. Charles will find it as delightful as I do.  Love, Joyce
Nan
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8 posted 2009-09-15 08:37 PM


Adding my vote to the consensus..

Nan's Morsels Writers' Blog

LindsayP
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9 posted 2009-09-15 10:23 PM



Sorry Bill, I'm certainly not in love with you my friend but you are one of my very

special friends on PIP. I'm sure you have a heart of gold and it shines through in all your writings. Have a great day and take care.

LindsayP
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10 posted 2009-09-15 10:26 PM



Sorry Liz I forgot to put in how much I

enjoyed your poem and I bet Bill did too.
Love to you dear Lady.

Lindsay

Oklahoma Rose
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11 posted 2009-09-15 11:34 PM


This is so true, Liz! He is such a talented poet. Both, with words and pictures. He is the King of Romance!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2009-09-16 01:04 PM


oui! I agree... wonderful writing Liz

Bill, you are one lucky guy to have us gals and guys swooning over you! ok, ok, maybe not all the guys.. Balladeer for sure but not sure about Lindsay     LOL

Bisous de Paris
RDB xxxx


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bill Charles
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13 posted 2009-09-16 11:18 PM


Dearest Elizabeth, you write words that I read and I am humbled by them. I'm touched deeply by your thoughts, and by the replies of poets to this writing that you have written. Actually, I'm at a loss for words to express my thanks, and to know the tenderness of a woman whom I've never met. But I feel as if I have through these most beautiful thoughts of you to me...

Thank you,

BC

brneyedgrly
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14 posted 2009-09-16 11:20 PM



I love bill charles too

        


Margherita
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15 posted 2009-09-17 07:04 AM


Dear Elizabeth, this is such a sweet appreciation and love letter for our dear Bill!

And to think that he had left us alone for such a long time and we wondered and missed him so much. Good that he is well and back!

Love,
Margherita

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16 posted 2009-09-17 09:51 AM


Bill, if you ever get the chance to meet her, you will find that she is as beautiful as her thoughts.
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17 posted 2009-09-17 10:51 AM


I agree with all about Bill Charles - he has a way of expression that is his alone.

And, I love Liz's poetry and seek it out.  However, the title of this poem makes me smile every morning.  Let's keep it here at the top for a while.  My coworkers will thank you.

xoxoox
Alison

Elizabeth Santos
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18 posted 2009-09-17 11:15 AM


I would only expect such a tender response from the "Love Poet". Thank you, Mr Charels and to all who have commented.
Balladeer, you're still my meter man, aren't you
Liz

Earth Angel
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19 posted 2009-09-17 11:51 AM


Hi, Liz. Just popped back in to read some more of the responses.

~ as for your remark to Balladeer, he's my meter maid, as well. Ooops-a-daisy! Freudian slip! I meant to say "meter man"! lol



Linda

Alison
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20 posted 2009-09-17 12:25 PM


Well, he's my meter reader!

A

JamesMichael
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21 posted 2009-09-17 07:26 PM


Its nice to be in love...James
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22 posted 2009-09-17 07:29 PM


You better watch this lady Bill, she can charm the skin off a snake

Have to agree though, you write romance so well Bill.

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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23 posted 2009-09-18 01:06 AM


It's just because he has two first names.

"Bill. Charles"

It sets him up for success I tell you.


Kidding.

Beautifully captured.

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